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We, as me. we stand before
You. The world lacking
We and I. meaning me
seen here meaning.
I stand before you
Lacking.
All the things. you think
Perfectly. Lacking
So beautifully when to see.
Writers sit hacking.
Away at Keys. Give we
Lacking
Carpal tunnel. no. a new
Generations Slacking.
Like the fingers. you hear
Clicking-comma-clacking.
Till you're fingers. All slacken
Lacking
A need for me. You stand. with I
Lacking
We. as me. we stand before
You. The world lacking
We and I. meaning me
seen here meaning.
I stand before you
Lacking.
Worlds though not. me and you
With missing parts of thought. tracking
What may not be not. Needed
With a forth double you. lead line whining
Another one is. The red wine
Lacking.
Periods. school ones. line ones.
Month ones. stacking
On days. like lines. punctuated
Now I. allowing
Only a singe mark such writing. my
Lacking.
Blood for. Others still need something.
Lacking
Knifes sharps. and razors
For hacking.
Bullets guns. and grazers
For backing
Words. Sharp tongues and vocalizers
Fort Lacking.
So. then. easily pierced.
Armor. Breaking
So someone’s. harmer
Gets lost smacking.
So many. nails. stick out
they are bleeding.
Me. dry. as we stand before
You. The world lacking
Me and I. meaning we
seen here meaning.
I stand before you
Lacking. a
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Comments
Great work, and much shorter, too.
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Life is like a straight line... but with curves.
Non Sequiam, Non Serviam.
Non Vi, Sed Verbo.
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"I imagine if you understand morse code a tap dancer must drive you crazy"
~Mitch Hedberg RIP
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Life is like a straight line... but with curves.
Non Sequiam, Non Serviam.
Non Vi, Sed Verbo.
[link]
"I imagine if you understand morse code a tap dancer must drive you crazy"
~Mitch Hedberg RIP
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queen of crime
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Life is like a straight line... but with curves.
Non Sequiam, Non Serviam.
Non Vi, Sed Verbo.
[link]
"I imagine if you understand morse code a tap dancer must drive you crazy"
~Mitch Hedberg RIP
I am sure that makes no sense to anyone else..
Very original!
I had to read it aloud in order to comprehend it at all, and my little brother thinks I've lost my mind. True enough. I hope its where I left it.
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